Thread:202nd Skywalker/@comment-28485972-20161031011711/@comment-27980194-20161031020132

From what I read the grammar is moderately fine, at least to the point where it doesn't really deserve a "cleanup." From my recollection, cleanup categories are for extreme cases when you utterly butcher the English language and any sort of construction. For example something that would deserve cleanup would be this http://theamazingworldofgumball.wikia.com/index.php?title=The_Love&diff=392547&oldid=392545. And there was a valid reason to lock the article as there was every reason to believe you'd start another edit war.