User blog comment:Mattalamode/Improvable: "The Boredom" and Disconnected Halves/@comment-30307603-20180429170313/@comment-31194372-20180507032143

I am garbage at being timely.

I don't really have issues with "The Boredom" in terms of memorability to be honest—a lot of the scenes work really well—but it isn't cohesive, so it just feels like a glorified compilation. I think my rewrite is sort of that idea of having to "kill your darlings"; even if a joke works well, if it doesn't actively contribute to the overall piece, it shouldn't be there.

No idea how I'll be tackling "The Test" honestly, but we'll just have to see how that all goes.