Thread:Greatveemon/@comment-4899150-20130322021546/@comment-5363666-20130322133653

Are we really doing an Action-Drama? Right now, it is more like an Action-Comedy.

Why Boy 1 and John keep talking to themselves?

and oh yeah! try an scripting program such as Finaldraft. It is a good application for writing scripts.

as I said before Gotbm should be more evil  and also has a very bad flashback that so bad, he wants to get a revenge. But right now, I'm totally confused.