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I wrote this a while back, but it's still eligible all the same. It was written after I decided that I wanted to write a more creative-piece as opposed to the more critical-based writing I always do in my blog posts.

It's not perfect. I think the ending relies a little too much on "telling" as opposed to "showing". That being said, I think it turned out decently given it was the first time I have done a creative piece in years for leisurely purposes.

"Carrie's and Darwin's romance has really taken flight, and none could be happier than Carrie's father, Vladus Lokowitchki. However, Vladus has some concerns about the relationship, mostly Carrie's supernatural nature. An otherworldly realization may relieve any of his doubts about their love."

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