Thread:Theawsomeyoutuber275/@comment-27980194-20170618003124

Your edits generally have been in the right direction, though there are some basic improvements that need to be made.

For starters, a character that was only mentioned in an episode doesn't necessarily warrant a description as it's generally incredibly minor.

Second of all, a lot of your descriptions can be incredibly brief. We're not expecting a total thesis on every appearance, but please attempt to add a slight bit more detail.

Third of all, your wiki links aren't according to the manual of style. For example you edit it to be like Gumball's when it should be something like Gumball's. Also if a character has already been wiki-linked in a section, it doesn't need to be wiki-linked again.

Last of all, be sure to be careful with some of your grammar and spelling, as those have been off. Your punctuation in particular stands out. 