User blog comment:Lunar Spirits/Battlefield-A a piece of writing by Gumabllguy34/@comment-4786943-20120308072548

Yeah.... D- on this... it might seem good to you kids, but the thought, theme, and meaning doesn't make sense. Sounds like you put some sorrowful words in a rhyming jumble, and called it poetry. Other then that, you are on the right track ;)